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  1. Posted: June 7, 2018In: Comedy

    “They say first impressions are the most important. Luckily, twelve-year-old geek, Gordon Periwinkle gets a second.” A reluctant geek looks to create a new image when he is the new kid in school. After he fails miserably, he gets a second chance to re-live that week, this time he takes a completely different path while fully knowing the outcome of each previous decision.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 8, 2018 at 1:49 pm

    btw, I wouldn't tell this in chronological order, I would begin with the lead getting his wish; with the audience only knowing he had the worst first day of all time, then switch back and forth between what he did and his new choices.The term would be, "In medias res"On the first day, it is bad, butRead more

    btw, I wouldn’t tell this in chronological order, I would begin with the lead getting his wish; with the audience only knowing he had the worst first day of all time, then switch back and forth between what he did and his new choices.

    The term would be, “In medias res”

    On the first day, it is bad, but he meets a girl who kinda likes his weirdness, as the lead ‘fixes’ the day and becomes more and more popular he slowly loses the girl, only to realize what a horrible mistake he has made.

    Just a thought

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  2. Posted: June 7, 2018In: Comedy

    “They say first impressions are the most important. Luckily, twelve-year-old geek, Gordon Periwinkle gets a second.” A reluctant geek looks to create a new image when he is the new kid in school. After he fails miserably, he gets a second chance to re-live that week, this time he takes a completely different path while fully knowing the outcome of each previous decision.

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    Added an answer on June 8, 2018 at 1:45 pm

    "After a horrible first day at school, a humiliated geek is given a chance to relive the day, only to discover perfect is harder work than he thought."

    “After a horrible first day at school, a humiliated geek is given a chance to relive the day, only to discover perfect is harder work than he thought.”

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  3. Posted: June 8, 2018In: Drama

    When his kinky girlfriend is apprehended by bounty hunters, a rich playboy is forced to team up with a hot-headed southern belle, as they delve into the seedy world of LA?s high-class S&M society, hoping to uncover clues to her whereabouts.

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    Added an answer on June 8, 2018 at 5:44 am

    I am missing the connection between?the bounty hunters and LA's Seedy world of high-class S&M. Bounty hunters would bring their skip back to where they are supposed to stand trial.

    I am missing the connection between?the bounty hunters and LA’s Seedy world of high-class S&M.

    Bounty hunters would bring their skip back to where they are supposed to stand trial.

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