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A fearless emu rises in revolt against the humans to free his fellow emus but first he must unite all the emu tribes.
Why is the Emu doing this? Why him, why now?
Why is the Emu doing this? Why him, why now?
See lessA young woman in search of her parents finds herself in a fight for her life when an extraterrestrial warrior believe her to be a legendary weapon created to defend against the invader.
The inciting incident and the goal should match.Inciting incident: Search for parents Goal: Survive alien attackThose two things don't match up and I would drop the part about searching for the parents.Also why does the extraterrestrial warrior attack her if he believes her to be a legendary weapon?Read more
The inciting incident and the goal should match.
Inciting incident: Search for parents
Goal: Survive alien attack
Those two things don’t match up and I would drop the part about searching for the parents.
Also why does the extraterrestrial warrior attack her if he believes her to be a legendary weapon? That part is confusing.
See lessWhen an black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four friends and their dog set out to find him, discovering that things are much more sinister than they seem.
The first half of this logline isn't bad, (Although I would drop the line about the dog) however I would listen to CraigD on the back half and be a little more specific.
The first half of this logline isn’t bad, (Although I would drop the line about the dog) however I would listen to CraigD on the back half and be a little more specific.
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