1. Posted: August 26, 2021In:

    A spirited daughter of Italian immigrants experiences first love while battling family disapproval and a massive tank of molasses that threatens to demolish her Boston neighborhood.

    Richiev Singularity

    I agree, two main opponents in a logline is a bit much. I have seen stories about disapproving parents but honestly, I am curious what that whole tank of molasses is all about. So I think your instincts are good.

    I agree, two main opponents in a logline is a bit much.

    I have seen stories about disapproving parents but honestly, I am curious what that whole tank of molasses is all about.

    So I think your instincts are good.

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  2. Posted: August 27, 2021In:

    An ethics prof and family man must prove his rehabilitation to a court-appointed psychiatrist when found not guilty of rape by reason of insanity and committed to a mental asylum.

    Richiev Singularity

    I think the brain tumor aspect is important enough it should be mentioned in the logline.

    I think the brain tumor aspect is important enough it should be mentioned in the logline.

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2021In:

    An ethics prof and family man must prove his rehabilitation to a court-appointed psychiatrist when found not guilty of rape by reason of insanity and committed to a mental asylum.

    Richiev Singularity

    Btw, I don't think this character is going to get much sympathy from the audience due to the nature of the crime. Is there a different crime he could be convicted of?

    Btw, I don’t think this character is going to get much sympathy from the audience due to the nature of the crime. Is there a different crime he could be convicted of?

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