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the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form. Than decide to compete for the soul of a novice priest with his destruction being the ultimate prize.
Isaiah 40:28 28 Do you not know? Have you not heard? The LORD is the everlasting God, the Creator of the ends of the earth. He will not grow tired or weary (yaga), and his understanding no one can fathom. But what they did not know... God got Bored God promises 7 Fallen Angels to give them back theiRead more
Isaiah 40:28
28 Do you not know? Have you not heard? The LORD is the everlasting God, the Creator of the ends of the earth. He will not grow tired or weary (yaga), and his understanding no one can fathom.
But what they did not know…
God got Bored
God promises 7 Fallen Angels to give them back their wings if they can corrupt the pure soul of a most promising man – a holy priest – with the 7 deadly sins reincarnated.
If the priest passes the tests he will take over Gods job and Jesus will be his right hand. This does not fall well with Jesus, who’s already waiting an eternity to take over his father?s job. Isn’t that the way it’s supposed to be?! .
Jesus convinces God that he must become one of the Seven Sins – LUST – trying to corrupt the priest?s soul. If he succeeds in corrupting the priest?s soul, he will take over Gods job instead of the priest. If one of the 6 Fallen Angels beats him to it, bad luck!
Only question now: “But does the priest really want to be God?’
And there’s your irony.
Priest: protag.
Jesus leading antag
Fallen angels: antags
God: as God
(think of the part of the setup of the story of Odysseus)
See lessthe seven deadly sins come to earth in human form. Than decide to compete for the soul of a novice priest with his destruction being the ultimate prize.
Dario has a point, start your logline with the protag, but don't make him a novice. Alex also has a point, so: "The world?s most altruistic priest must avoid eternal damnation when the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form and wage for his soul." A perfect logline for me, although you can arRead more
Dario has a point, start your logline with the protag, but don’t make him a novice.
Alex also has a point, so:
“The world?s most altruistic priest must avoid eternal damnation when the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form and wage for his soul.”
A perfect logline for me, although you can argue that the logline must describe how he’s going to fight these 7 sins in human form.
If you think about it, it is strange, “sins” turning in to “human form”. Maybe all deadly sins made by humans from the beginning of time (after Adam and Eve are kicked from Heaven) combined now take shape as 7 evil man. These evil man approach the priest one after the other to sell him:
LUST: in the form of a girl he had a huge crush on before he became a priest but could not have – no he can;
GLUTTONY: the priest gets invited to homeless shelter by the new owner running it to talk about building new shelters. While he sees the a luxury dinner that is prepared for only him, he goes and sit at the table of the homeless who eat only bread with cheese.
PRIDE: he is offered a job as a TV priest.
AND SO ON… But somewhere in the middle a bell must ring -the priest is on to them – so them trying to ‘trick’ him must become more and more subtle. Knowing this you must decide the order of the possible Sins presented to him.
For inspiration: http://www.screenplayfest.com/archives/review/unholy-swap
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This logline does it for me. I also like the tittle, but could have had a bit more irony. Make the title: "Sexbomb" ... and maybe I can 'turn you off' while you (still)' turn me on'!! She looks to be a real Catch 22 for him... http://songteksten.net/lyric/466/11157/tom-jones/sex-bomb.html
This logline does it for me. I also like the tittle, but could have had a bit more irony. Make the title: “Sexbomb” … and maybe I can ‘turn you off’ while you (still)’ turn me on’!!
She looks to be a real Catch 22 for him…
http://songteksten.net/lyric/466/11157/tom-jones/sex-bomb.html
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