1. Posted: March 23, 2015In:

    A man races against time to save his fiance on the 74th floor of the South Tower on 9/11.

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    My 'vijf cent' You can change "man" for an other more powerful word that describes the man, if that's even possible. For so far: A adulteress man races against time to save his fiance on the 74th floor of the South Tower on 9/11. Get back later...

    My ‘vijf cent’
    You can change “man” for an other more powerful word that describes the man, if that’s even possible. For so far:

    A adulteress man races against time to save his fiance on the 74th floor of the South Tower on 9/11.

    Get back later…

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2015In:

    A man races against time to save his fiance on the 74th floor of the South Tower on 9/11.

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    You made it AND you got it!! And I personally can feel your story although I?m glad not to have experienced it.. Don't know if this is only describing a situation - but I leave that to others on this site Now it's time for me ? Tarantino and Spielberg - to do the same. Maybe it?s time to raise the sRead more

    You made it AND you got it!! And I personally can feel your story although I?m glad not to have experienced it.. Don’t know if this is only describing a situation – but I leave that to others on this site Now it’s time for me ? Tarantino and Spielberg – to do the same. Maybe it?s time to raise the stakes; make it 19 words?! Let all loglines be a learning experience. Amen?

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  3. Posted: March 19, 2015In:

    When Bruce Lee loses his powers to Dr. Doom, he teams up with the Avengers to ?cross swords? with his nemesis – in an all evil parallel universe – and retake his might.

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    Thanks, Richiev this is very helpful. Not mixing fictional characters with real ones. The next logline will again be enlightened ...

    Thanks, Richiev this is very helpful. Not mixing fictional characters with real ones.

    The next logline will again be enlightened …

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