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  1. Posted: March 2, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on March 6, 2015 at 3:41 am

    I like both your suggestions, but I want to stay as close to the real facts as possible. There was a escape in 43 but the luftwaffe officer was not part of it. This story played out earlier. DGP, it could be a good story element next to your convincing setup, if one of the children of the LuftwaffeRead more

    I like both your suggestions, but I want to stay as close to the real facts as possible. There was a escape in 43 but the luftwaffe officer was not part of it. This story played out earlier.

    DGP, it could be a good story element next to your convincing setup, if one of the children of the Luftwaffe officer meets one of the Jewish children in the cattle wagon next to their luxury wagon, and in a split second they become friend, only to say farewell a few hours later.

    This movie MUST be top quality and as close to the real facts as possible, otherwise I will have the Jewish people hunting me down for the rest of my earthly life.

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  2. Posted: March 2, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on March 5, 2015 at 4:29 am

    THANKS DGP, I can work with that!! And Malkinia junction is where it all went wrong for them. Literally the deciding junction in their lives. Only problem is that the camp commandant ALREADY KNOWS that THEY ARE ARIAN. And kills them anyway. Leave no possible traces (that's a riskfactor for OperationRead more

    THANKS DGP, I can work with that!! And Malkinia junction is where it all went wrong for them. Literally the deciding junction in their lives. Only problem is that the camp commandant ALREADY KNOWS that THEY ARE ARIAN. And kills them anyway. Leave no possible traces (that’s a riskfactor for Operation Reinhard)) of the genocide in the death camp(s). The camp commandant can’t take the risk that the Luftwaffe officer spreads the word about what is happening in the camps. Only the people that workt at the death camps, under a special code, could know the terrible thruth.

    “When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up on a train to concentration camp Treblinka they must convince the death camp commandant that they are ?harmless? and save their lives.?

    or

    “When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up on a train to death camp Treblinka they must quicly convince the camp commandant that they are arians and save their lives.?

    The camp commandant did not want them to prove whatever in ‘whatever time’. So “X time” may be filled in with ‘little or nothing filled in at al. According to the sentence construction: And where do they convince the commandant, in the train or the camp. And…

    So first they want to convince the commandant that they are arian, but when they notice this is not the real problem, they will try to convince the commandant that they will never’ “bare witnes”. If I still use the word arian in the logline I can controle the audiance in what I want them to think at first. Building up emotion.

    When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in deathcamp Treblinka, they must quickly convince the camp commandant (that) they are proud ‘Aryans’ and save their lives?

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on March 5, 2015 at 4:29 am

    THANKS DGP, I can work with that!! And Malkinia junction is where it all went wrong for them. Literally the deciding junction in their lives. Only problem is that the camp commandant ALREADY KNOWS that THEY ARE ARIAN. And kills them anyway. Leave no possible traces (that's a riskfactor for OperationRead more

    THANKS DGP, I can work with that!! And Malkinia junction is where it all went wrong for them. Literally the deciding junction in their lives. Only problem is that the camp commandant ALREADY KNOWS that THEY ARE ARIAN. And kills them anyway. Leave no possible traces (that’s a riskfactor for Operation Reinhard)) of the genocide in the death camp(s). The camp commandant can’t take the risk that the Luftwaffe officer spreads the word about what is happening in the camps. Only the people that workt at the death camps, under a special code, could know the terrible thruth.

    “When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up on a train to concentration camp Treblinka they must convince the death camp commandant that they are ?harmless? and save their lives.?

    or

    “When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up on a train to death camp Treblinka they must quicly convince the camp commandant that they are arians and save their lives.?

    The camp commandant did not want them to prove whatever in ‘whatever time’. So “X time” may be filled in with ‘little or nothing filled in at al. According to the sentence construction: And where do they convince the commandant, in the train or the camp. And…

    So first they want to convince the commandant that they are arian, but when they notice this is not the real problem, they will try to convince the commandant that they will never’ “bare witnes”. If I still use the word arian in the logline I can controle the audiance in what I want them to think at first. Building up emotion.

    When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in deathcamp Treblinka, they must quickly convince the camp commandant (that) they are proud ‘Aryans’ and save their lives?

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