1. Posted: March 3, 2015In:

    When a young woman's grandmother selfishly dies whilst visiting their ancestral Outback town she, and her disparate sister, reluctantly stay on and inadvertently uncover their family's sordid past, forcing them to confront their own, ruthless identities.

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    .... What identeties are we speaking of? Describe the protags! in what way are they ruthless (without knowing the title) ?

    …. What identeties are we speaking of? Describe the protags! in what way are they ruthless (without knowing the title) ?

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  2. Posted: March 2, 2015In:

    When a desperate scientist uploads his dying wife's consciousness to a computer, he believes he has cheated death, but when she begins uploading others against their will, he'll lead a ragtag team into a virtual world to shut her down.

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    Being a novice, I can't see anything wrong with this logline. I like it. Also like the title.

    Being a novice, I can’t see anything wrong with this logline. I like it. Also like the title.

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2015In:

    When a desperate scientist uploads his dying wife's consciousness to a computer, he believes he has cheated death, but when she begins uploading others against their will, he'll lead a ragtag team into a virtual world to shut her down.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner

    Being a novice, I can't see anything wrong with this logline. I like it. Also like the title.

    Being a novice, I can’t see anything wrong with this logline. I like it. Also like the title.

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