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  1. Posted: March 1, 2015In: Public

    Spending months planning his wife's murder to make it look like suicide. A man comes home to find his wife has killed herself. He now has to prove he didn't do it.

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    Added an answer on March 2, 2015 at 6:08 am

    I like the irony in story idea but I'm confused, who is the protag/antag here? OK, the man is the protag, but do we root for him. Maybe if he is feeling remorse later on in the story. But now we still do not know who the antag is; it can't be the woman because she, is described here, as a victim. WeRead more

    I like the irony in story idea but I’m confused, who is the protag/antag here? OK, the man is the protag, but do we root for him. Maybe if he is feeling remorse later on in the story. But now we still do not know who the antag is; it can’t be the woman because she, is described here, as a victim. We also do not have a description of the leading character(s) character(.s).

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    Protag: a famous and jealous Judge
    antag: beatifull woman
    catalist: her committing adultery

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  2. Posted: March 1, 2015In: Public

    Spending months planning his wife's murder to make it look like suicide. A man comes home to find his wife has killed herself. He now has to prove he didn't do it.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on March 2, 2015 at 6:08 am

    I like the irony in story idea but I'm confused, who is the protag/antag here? OK, the man is the protag, but do we root for him. Maybe if he is feeling remorse later on in the story. But now we still do not know who the antag is; it can't be the woman because she, is described here, as a victim. WeRead more

    I like the irony in story idea but I’m confused, who is the protag/antag here? OK, the man is the protag, but do we root for him. Maybe if he is feeling remorse later on in the story. But now we still do not know who the antag is; it can’t be the woman because she, is described here, as a victim. We also do not have a description of the leading character(s) character(.s).

    For instance;

    Protag: a famous and jealous Judge
    antag: beatifull woman
    catalist: her committing adultery

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  3. Posted: February 28, 2015In: Public

    "When her seafaring father goes missing, a headstrong girl who grew up upon stories of the sea, disguises herself as a boy and joins the crew of a Phoenician trading galley to discover clues to her dads whereabouts."

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    Added an answer on March 1, 2015 at 6:21 am

    On what playing field does this story take place? Just before/while/just after - a major incident in time in Phoenician history Trying to start things up, My take in sucky English: "Just before Alexander the Greats siege of Tyre in 332 B.C. , a headstrong Phoenician girl disguised as a boy joins theRead more

    On what playing field does this story take place?

    Just before/while/just after – a major incident in time in Phoenician history

    Trying to start things up, My take in sucky English:

    “Just before Alexander the Greats siege of Tyre in 332 B.C. , a headstrong Phoenician girl disguised as a boy joins the crew of one of her fathers (Phoenician) trading galleys (leaving Tyre), to discover he has been taken prisoner by Alexander?s army and send to America?s first prison colony “

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