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A young orphan boy in India receives a letter through which it is revealed that he has inherited some treasure which has been lying buried in his ancestral home in Pakistan. When he illegally reaches there he finds out that this old dilapidated burnt down house is now a terrorist camp .
"Young orphan boy" is a much better description for a logline than just a simple name. But I don't understand how the "comedy" genre matches with your logline. Also, your hero doesn't have any clear goal after finding out that his house is now a terrorist camp. You have to be specific about three thRead more
“Young orphan boy” is a much better description for a logline than just a simple name.
See lessBut I don’t understand how the “comedy” genre matches with your logline.
Also, your hero doesn’t have any clear goal after finding out that his house is now a terrorist camp.
You have to be specific about three things in your logline: the inciting incident, your main character and your story goal.
Mahi doesn’t return to the college after her summer internship and everyone blames her classmate Abhinav who used to stalk her for her drop out, so guilt ridden Abhinav takes a journey to convince Mahi not to drop out because of him, but in this journey he discovers darker and shocking secrets of Mahi.
Sounds like an interesting concept. Just be sure to know how to write a logline. What you've written above reads more like a story summary in a tv magazine. Use the following formula and try it again: When?[a major event happens],?[the hero],?must?[do the main action]. Also, you don't need any speciRead more
Sounds like an interesting concept.
Just be sure to know how to write a logline. What you’ve written above reads more like a story summary in a tv magazine.
Use the following formula and try it again:
When?[a major event happens],?[the hero],?must?[do the main action].Also, you don’t need any specific names or long sentences inside the logline.
See lessBe sure to state a clear objective goal your hero has to achieve by the end of the story. “Discover dark and shocking secrets” sounds too vague for me to create a concept for a feature-length movie.
When he meets an exchange literature student, a shy politics nerd joins the university theater group together with her to win her heart before she leaves one month later.
When he meets an exchange student, a socially awkward nerd joins the university play to win the part of Romeo and have his first kiss ever with his crush before she returns to her home country.
When he meets an exchange student, a socially awkward nerd joins the university play to win the part of Romeo and have his first kiss ever with his crush before she returns to her home country.
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