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A charismatic young white supremacist goes to prison, where hard experience teaches him the error of his ways. When released, he resolves to leave his former life behind — but finds to his horror that it may be too late to save his kid brother from repeating his mistakes.
Hey, interesting father-kid concept about racism. Best is you avoid many adjectives to describe your main character ?in a logline. The word "charismatic" is not needed and doesn't give us any more information we need to know. Drop it. I think young white supremacist is enough. But be remembered: eveRead more
Hey, interesting father-kid concept about racism.
Best is you avoid many adjectives to describe your main character ?in a logline. The word “charismatic” is not needed and doesn’t give us any more information we need to know. Drop it.
I think young white supremacist is enough.
But be remembered: every word should have a meaning in a logline.
Also, ?try to sum up a logline within one sentence.
Have a look at the formula stated on this page:
“When [a major event happens], [the hero], must [do the main action].”
You need an inciting incident, a MC and an objective goal your hero strives for.
Try to write your logline this way.
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After falling in love with his dream woman actress during a film collaboration, an agoraphobic writer struggles to attend a series of PR dates hoping to win her heart.
Craig helped me on this version two months ago. I thought long about the concept and I think this version is the one I always strived for. Thanks for your reviews in advance, folks!
Craig helped me on this version two months ago. I thought long about the concept and I think this version is the one I always strived for.
See lessThanks for your reviews in advance, folks!