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When a disgraced Intel decodes a Commanders Tweets, conscious to inform his ex-handlers and save his country, but getting pass a new Command chain can risk his life.
I'm confused by the structure of this sentence. What do you mean with "tweets" and what does a neuropsychiatrist has to do with a commander? And what, specifically, must the neuropsychiatrist do before its too late? You have to give a detailed description of the main characters, the conflict and theRead more
I’m confused by the structure of this sentence.
What do you mean with “tweets” and what does a neuropsychiatrist has to do with a commander?
And what, specifically, must the neuropsychiatrist do before its too late?
You have to give a detailed description of the main characters, the conflict and the goal.
I don’t see a story here. Not yet.
Best regards!
See lessRENEWED – While riding the bus, an introvert girl falls in love with the fantasy of a boy she sees, he introduces her to the vast landscape of people living in her mind, all fighting to control her.
The plot sounds very interesting to me, but I see several problems at the moment: - What does "troubled" mean? The girl seems to have a scar or wound she has to overcome. But the word "troubled" is ?too vague for a logline. - What does "gain control back" mean exactly? I see where you're coming fromRead more
The plot sounds very interesting to me, but I see several problems at the moment:
– What does “troubled” mean? The girl seems to have a scar or wound she has to overcome. But the word “troubled” is ?too vague for a logline.
– What does “gain control back” mean exactly? I see where you’re coming from, but nevertheless it needs to be described more specifically.
– What do you want to explore with your story? Which kind of question do you want to be answered?
Take, for example, a film which wants to find an answer on why women and men cheat on each other. So your question is: What leads to men and women cheating on each other? Your characters should represent different aspects of an argument, so you can let the story play out the main reason.
Hope it helps!
Good luck with it!
See lessAny screenwriters out there want to help me
I have the same kind of problem, knightrider. There are so many ideas I'm collecting and thinking about every day. It's hard to pick one and follow through the process of writing and creating. Every now and then, some new thoughts pop up and you don't know what you should do next. I found out that yRead more
I have the same kind of problem, knightrider. There are so many ideas I’m collecting and thinking about every day. It’s hard to pick one and follow through the process of writing and creating.
See lessEvery now and then, some new thoughts pop up and you don’t know what you should do next.
I found out that you should mainly focus on one idea and not think about anything other than that while writing it down.
Just pick the story or sentence which sounds the best and work your way through.
Sooner or later, you have to make a decision. It’s never going to be easy, but remember: your other ideas won’t be running away.
You have enough time to do every single one of them in the future.