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One lonely Filipino seafarer in a cruise ship finds comfort to his roommate who saves money for his wedding but he unexpectedly falls for him, and as they sail together his feelings grow deeper until he’s force to reveal it.
I can see a concept, but I can't see a logline with the needed elements. Discovering your own identity can be part of your characters dramatic need. But you want him to have some kind of visual goal as well in order to visualize the story. Preparing for a wedding is one point you make. What does thaRead more
I can see a concept, but I can’t see a logline with the needed elements.
See lessDiscovering your own identity can be part of your characters dramatic need. But you want him to have some kind of visual goal as well in order to visualize the story.
Preparing for a wedding is one point you make. What does that mean? Too vague.
The other point is attempting suicide. How does this reflect the direction of your story?
In a bid to keep his job, a commitment-phobic womanizer seduces his boss’s wholesome daughter, but when she genuinely falls for him, he must continue the charade.
Hey darkhorse, Sounds for me like a comedy concept. Like you said previously, it could be fun to watch as a sitcom. However, I agree with dpg and riechiev: him seducing his daughter seems more likely to upset the boss, so how do you want so solve this? And you have to make him really desperate to keRead more
Hey darkhorse,
Sounds for me like a comedy concept. Like you said previously, it could be fun to watch as a sitcom.
See lessHowever, I agree with dpg and riechiev: him seducing his daughter seems more likely to upset the boss, so how do you want so solve this?
And you have to make him really desperate to keep the job. Like he really needs the job to pay off his debt or something similar. That way we can sympathize with him needing the job.
After his daughter who is a schoolteacher disappeared unexpectedly, a police officer has 3 hours to stop terrorists from blowing up the U.S. Capitol building.
What's the ultimate goal of your main character (police officer)? Rescuing his daughter? Stopping the terrorists? Rescuing himself after the robbery?
What’s the ultimate goal of your main character (police officer)?
Rescuing his daughter? Stopping the terrorists? Rescuing himself after the robbery?
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