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When a former priest on death row breaks out of prison, all he wants is a fresh start, but his serial-killer split personality only makes it harder for him to evade the FBI? and the lethal injection.
The inciting incident is his split-personality breaks him out of prison, and when he arrives in a new city, he finds a house and falls in love with it, making it his goal to gain enough money to purchase it.
The inciting incident is his split-personality breaks him out of prison, and when he arrives in a new city, he finds a house and falls in love with it, making it his goal to gain enough money to purchase it.
See lessWhen a former priest on death row breaks out of prison, all he wants is a fresh start, but his serial-killer split personality only makes it harder for him to evade the FBI? and the lethal injection.
Is it not clear that his goal is a fresh start? It seemed to me that was definitive enough of a goal. In my previous draft of the logline, I had that his goal was to settle down?, which speaks to his more tangible goal to buy a house. What do you think of that? Would saying he wants to buy a house bRead more
Is it not clear that his goal is a fresh start? It seemed to me that was definitive enough of a goal.
In my previous draft of the logline, I had that his goal was to settle down?, which speaks to his more tangible goal to buy a house. What do you think of that? Would saying he wants to buy a house be too specific?
See lessHazel and Augustus, two teenagers who meet in a cancer support group travel to Amsterdam and discover the depths of love, pain, and sacrifice.
A lot of the core elements of a logline are missing. -Protagonist: who is the Protagonist. Hazel or Augustus? You must make that clear. -A clear goal: "discover the depths of love..." is very vague and is very unclear about what exactly the protagonist's goal is -Inciting incident: Is it when they tRead more
A lot of the core elements of a logline are missing.
-Protagonist: who is the Protagonist. Hazel or Augustus? You must make that clear.
See less-A clear goal: “discover the depths of love…” is very vague and is very unclear about what exactly the protagonist’s goal is
-Inciting incident: Is it when they travel to Amsterdam?
-Antagonist: and how and what stands in the way of the Protagonist’s goal