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  1. Posted: August 1, 2015In: Public

    When a passive psychiatrist?s patient discovers his secret ability to sense and absorb people?s mental distress, she pressures him to challenge his exploitative boss in order to pursue his dream of starting a nonprofit practice.

    shaankle Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 2, 2015 at 8:00 am

    Yea, I now realize that that is unclear. The psychiatrist is the one with the abilities. It?s a short!

    Yea, I now realize that that is unclear. The psychiatrist is the one with the abilities. It?s a short!

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  2. Posted: August 1, 2015In: Public

    When a passive psychiatrist?s patient discovers his secret ability to sense and absorb people?s mental distress, she pressures him to challenge his exploitative boss in order to pursue his dream of starting a nonprofit practice.

    shaankle Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 1, 2015 at 12:21 pm

    Oh good catch! It indeed is unclear which person has the ability. FYI, the Psychiatrist has the abilities.

    Oh good catch! It indeed is unclear which person has the ability. FYI, the Psychiatrist has the abilities.

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  3. Posted: June 26, 2015In: Public

    A religious man with a serial-killer split personality struggles to suppress his sinister side while evading the detective who apprehended him in the first place.

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2015 at 4:01 am

    Thank you for the feedback. He actually used to be a priest! Hmm I thought the logline does describe a plot. That he's evading the detective. It's essentially an escape and runaway plot. I guess I could make that clearer. Also, you're right about no mention of the inciting incident. I'll work that iRead more

    Thank you for the feedback. He actually used to be a priest! Hmm I thought the logline does describe a plot. That he’s evading the detective. It’s essentially an escape and runaway plot. I guess I could make that clearer. Also, you’re right about no mention of the inciting incident. I’ll work that in. Thanks!

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