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  1. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'

    shayanmahmud
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 6:25 pm

    Yeah, that makes sense. Thanks for your help. Any other suggestions guys? The advice is really helping.

    Yeah, that makes sense. Thanks for your help. Any other suggestions guys? The advice is really helping.

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  2. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'

    shayanmahmud
    Added an answer on October 16, 2013 at 2:16 pm

    I feel the story is primarily about the pursuit of justice and his failure to do so at every turn which eventually leads him to take matters into his own hands. With that in mind, Is it possible to explore both themes? the inciting incident or the end of the 1st act being his murder, the end of theRead more

    I feel the story is primarily about the pursuit of justice and his failure to do so at every turn which eventually leads him to take matters into his own hands. With that in mind, Is it possible to explore both themes? the inciting incident or the end of the 1st act being his murder, the end of the 2nd being the failure of the courts and the 3rd when he takes matters into his own hands? It explores different underlying themes this way including the difference between justice and revenge/ The legal framework of Pakistan/ Women’s rights( The man was murdered defending his sister who was being teased by the influential man). What do you guys think? Do you think all this could be encapsulated in one film?

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  3. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'

    shayanmahmud
    Added an answer on October 15, 2013 at 8:02 pm

    Yep. man would be better. Thanks.

    Yep. man would be better. Thanks.

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