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  1. Posted: May 12, 2015In: Public

    After a curse is placed on him a suicidal young man must convince his non-committal girlfriend to fall in love with him before he can kill himself.

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    Added an answer on May 14, 2015 at 2:39 am

    I was thoroughly confused by this logline. Mostly I think I would find it unlikely for an audience to root for a main character whose goal it is to kill himself. It seems to me maybe a dark comedy but then it also sounds like it has a supernatural element to it because of the curse part. It just doeRead more

    I was thoroughly confused by this logline. Mostly I think I would find it unlikely for an audience to root for a main character whose goal it is to kill himself. It seems to me maybe a dark comedy but then it also sounds like it has a supernatural element to it because of the curse part. It just doesn’t leave me with a clear picture.

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  2. Posted: May 14, 2015In: Public

    When a troubled American expatriate is offered work at the Tengen Hotel, he soon discovers that Tokyo’s most exclusive hotel is also the base of operations for a major crime syndicate. Now embroiled in their conspiracy to appropriate control over the city, the expatriate must choose between duty or sentiment as both his mettle and loyalty are put to the test.

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    Added an answer on May 14, 2015 at 2:33 am

    I'll be honest enough to say I don't know what a dispora is. And I'm a writer. But I can tell from the rest of the logline what kind of story this is. I just don't have enough of a handle on what he must do in order to prove his loyalty and maybe need a hint as to why. Are they going to kill him? KiRead more

    I’ll be honest enough to say I don’t know what a dispora is. And I’m a writer. But I can tell from the rest of the logline what kind of story this is. I just don’t have enough of a handle on what he must do in order to prove his loyalty and maybe need a hint as to why. Are they going to kill him? Kill his girlfriend etc.?

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