Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
Two best friends who have desk jobs at a top secret spy agency are suddenly thrown into a massive conspiracy caused by a rogue agent.
This is a good introduction to the plot but yes it does need to address what happens next. Also maybe a little wordy at the beginning. Can just say "Two pencil pushers at a top secret spy agency stumble onto a massive conspiracy etc... and then say what they must do next.
This is a good introduction to the plot but yes it does need to address what happens next. Also maybe a little wordy at the beginning. Can just say “Two pencil pushers at a top secret spy agency stumble onto a massive conspiracy etc… and then say what they must do next.
See lessThomas Gunn an New Hampshire lawenforcement officer, gets a call from an old friend from Mississippi, to come down and solve a murder. Finding out who did it and many wrenchs thrown in the process
I agree with the other posters on the no name. Also the importance of spelling and grammar can't be stressed enough. If there are spelling and grammar mistakes in the logline, one can assume the script will be difficult to read. Maybe find an editor who will work with you?
I agree with the other posters on the no name. Also the importance of spelling and grammar can’t be stressed enough. If there are spelling and grammar mistakes in the logline, one can assume the script will be difficult to read. Maybe find an editor who will work with you?
See lessA young advertising executive, on a rebound, falls for the girlfriend of his close childhood friend and woos her till she yields; they carry out a clandestine affair right under the nose of her boyfriend till she begins to suffer from guilt and decides to call off the affair; but her boyfriend comes to know of the affair and has his own plans.
It can be shortened and simplified. What about - "A young executive on a rebound falls for and has an affair with his best friend's girl. When exposed, he must...(what must he do?) or (what are the consequences if he fails?).
It can be shortened and simplified. What about – “A young executive on a rebound falls for and has an affair with his best friend’s girl. When exposed, he must…(what must he do?) or (what are the consequences if he fails?).
See less