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ON THE BRINK OF DEFEAT, THE ARMY TURNS TO AN HONOR BOUND PILOT TO RISK COURT-MARTIAL AND THE LIVES OF HIS CREW.
I have a feeling you know your story well, but it's not coming across in the above logline. ?Maybe try reworking it in this format: ?When (inciting incident) happens, (Protagonist) must (goal) before (stakes if he fails.)
I have a feeling you know your story well, but it’s not coming across in the above logline. ?Maybe try reworking it in this format: ?When (inciting incident) happens, (Protagonist) must (goal) before (stakes if he fails.)
See lessA plucky archaeologist and his meddlesome team must search a brittle primordial underground temple for escape when an excavation mishap destroys the entrance and awakens a man-eating Yeti.
Great concept. ?You might want to find a description other than "plucky" to differentiate this archaeologist from others (Indiana Jones, ?etc.) ? ?"A claustrophobic archaeologist, trapped inside an ancient temple by a vindictive coworker, ?accidentally awakens a man-eating Yeti and must find an escaRead more
Great concept. ?You might want to find a description other than “plucky” to differentiate this archaeologist from others (Indiana Jones, ?etc.) ? ?”A claustrophobic archaeologist, trapped inside an ancient temple by a vindictive coworker, ?accidentally awakens a man-eating Yeti and must find an escape before he suffocates or is eaten alive.”
See lessAn anti authority figure begins to kill lawmen and takes their badges as trophies until an old gunman steps in to avenge the death of a childhood friend.
Great advice, ?Foxtrot25. ?The only thing I can add is that I'd like to know why the cowboy "must" avenge the friend and what the stakes are if he fails.
Great advice, ?Foxtrot25. ?The only thing I can add is that I’d like to know why the cowboy “must” avenge the friend and what the stakes are if he fails.
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