Aren’t there any sycophants in the house? LOL, great feedback. I have gone round and round on this logline. Here’s another version for your consideration. It’s too long but gives more explanation of what the story’s about.? Help!

After a tragic mistake, a golf prodigy is?blacklisted by a powerful sports agent.? Honoring the deathbed promise to his late wife, he vows to always put their son first and resigns himself to hustling lessons at a second rate club.?A?decade later, desperate to keep his smothered teenaged son, a gifted guitarist, from leaving him,?father and son make a deal:??the father will try for the comeback of a lifetime if the son agrees to be his caddy for the summer,? but his successful comeback ?is something his former agent, now the?worldwide leader in sports equipment, cannot allow.