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  1. Posted: April 13, 2012In: Public

    An unemployed biologic weapons scientist creates a love potion and then is chased by the FBI as an international terrorist.

    SQM
    Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 3:58 pm

    I love it! It takes a moment for it to sink it, but then BAM! OMG! That is hilarious!

    I love it!
    It takes a moment for it to sink it, but then BAM! OMG! That is hilarious!

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  2. Posted: April 9, 2012

    "Mamie Marchbanks, seventeen and oh so sassy, is a performer. She performs with circuses, Mexican travelling players and Mack Sennett, but her father and his bounty hunter are in pursuit."

    SQM
    Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 3:56 pm

    "A young sassy circus performer on the run is pursued by her father." Why? While bounty hunter implies criminal activity, here there is the possibility he wants her because....? She inherited her mother's fortune and he needs to get her under his control to get to it? She ran away with knowledge inRead more

    “A young sassy circus performer on the run is pursued by her father.”

    Why? While bounty hunter implies criminal activity, here there is the possibility he wants her because….? She inherited her mother’s fortune and he needs to get her under his control to get to it? She ran away with knowledge in regards to his illegal business activities? Because he loves her and wants to find her before some one else does? Again, because?

    I googled “Mexican Traveling Players,” and it came up with soccer teams. Do you mean a Mexican troupe of traveling actors? Is she Mexican?

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  3. Posted: April 11, 2012

    When left for dead by his former gang, a reformed outlaw seeks to avenge the murder of his family after an Indian mystic "gifts" him eternal life.

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    Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 3:43 pm

    Like it! Reminds me of "The Missing" with Tommy Lee Jones. Could we have thumbs up and down buttons for those who just want to make a quick comment? And what's with the plus and minus numbers on the side?

    Like it!

    Reminds me of “The Missing” with Tommy Lee Jones.

    Could we have thumbs up and down buttons for those who just want to make a quick comment?

    And what’s with the plus and minus numbers on the side?

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