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  1. Posted: March 16, 2019In: Drama

    When a king finds a strong fierce woman to be his queen, he must fight to protect from his adversary, a royal woodsman, who wants to dethrone him and keep him from having an heir.

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    Added an answer on March 18, 2019 at 1:57 am

    What is a royal woodsman? Seems contradictory. Woodsmen are usually....er...woody. Royalty usually doesn't concern themselves with back-breaking work like cutting wood.? Would make sense? if the woodsman was a wood elf. You could make the adversary a miner. Hide her in the mines. Or a pirate, hide hRead more

    What is a royal woodsman? Seems contradictory. Woodsmen are usually….er…woody. Royalty usually doesn’t concern themselves with back-breaking work like cutting wood.? Would make sense? if the woodsman was a wood elf.

    You could make the adversary a miner. Hide her in the mines. Or a pirate, hide her away on his boat or an island. Or the town baker who is secretly a mage, hide her away in a portable hole.

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  2. Posted: April 23, 2018In: Family

    When two high school enemies discover their single parent’s newfound love, they must team up to destroy it or end up as step brothers

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    Added an answer on May 5, 2018 at 2:19 pm

    Great set up. I can see the movie already. Suggestion: "Two high school rivals" "two high school arch-enemies" Plural form of nemesis = nemeses. So nemesis is not, technically, accurate.

    Great set up. I can see the movie already.
    Suggestion:
    “Two high school rivals”
    “two high school arch-enemies”
    Plural form of nemesis = nemeses. So nemesis is not, technically, accurate.

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  3. Posted: January 19, 2017In: Romance

    When an agoraphobic online student meets his soulmate, he gets a job at a bar to face his fear in public, only to find out that his love is a pop star.

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    Added an answer on January 22, 2017 at 12:52 am

    I'm not 100% happy with this but here goes: "When an agoraphobic music student meets his soulmate and discovers she?is a pop diva, he decides to?face his fears by working at the hottest concert venue in town." Hello date movie. I've made him a music student. The pop diva seeks him out because he wriRead more

    I’m not 100% happy with this but here goes:

    “When an agoraphobic music student meets his soulmate and discovers she?is a pop diva, he decides to?face his fears by working at the hottest concert venue in town.”

    Hello date movie.

    I’ve made him a music student. The pop diva seeks him out because he writes hauntingly beautiful melodies. They spark a romance and he tries to change for her by getting a job at the hottest concert hall?in town.

    Maybe they can sing a duet on stage together in front of a huge crowd for the final scene. Maybe he can only sing on stage with a blindfold on and the song is called “Love is Blind” or something cheesy like that.

    And I don’t know how to change the font size, sorry! S

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