1. Posted: December 29, 2016In:

    A perfectionist Youtube star’s page views plummet when she falls for a hang loose gamer geek. Their PDA insecurities and her scheming manager threaten to ctrl+alt+delete their dreams to go public with their “In a relationship” status.

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    Thanks Nir and Craig,Her job is a Youtuber dishing out relationship advice with her boyfriend.Boyfriend dumps her so she needs a new boyfriend to produce the show.The shy pro gamer she falls for is not prime time material. Show suffers, big $$$ deal threatens to unravel, manager freaking out, tryingRead more

    Thanks Nir and Craig,

    Her job is a Youtuber dishing out relationship advice with her boyfriend.

    Boyfriend dumps her so she needs a new boyfriend to produce the show.

    The shy pro gamer she falls for is not prime time material.

    Show suffers, big $$$ deal threatens to unravel, manager freaking out, trying to pull them apart and pair her with a very presentable Prince Charming (who does a lot of PDA but is a narcissist A hole).

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  2. Posted: December 29, 2016In:

    A perfectionist Youtube star’s page views plummet when she falls for a hang loose gamer geek. Their PDA insecurities and her scheming manager threaten to ctrl+alt+delete their dreams to go public with their “In a relationship” status.

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    OK I did some revisions.? Any feedback is much appreciated.Movie Title is "P.D.A.?Public Displays of Affection"Loglines are as follows:?1 - 4? don't follow the: when+hero+must formula. But they express the story concept quite well.1 What if the love of your life couldn't show their affection for youRead more

    OK I did some revisions.? Any feedback is much appreciated.

    Movie Title is “P.D.A.?Public Displays of Affection”

    Loglines are as follows:?1 – 4? don’t follow the: when+hero+must formula. But they express the story concept quite well.

    1 What if the love of your life couldn’t show their affection for you ?

    2 What if the love of your life couldn’t show their affection for you in public?

    3 What if the?person you’ve fallen in love with ?couldn’t show their affection for you?

    4 What if the?person you’ve fallen in love with ?couldn’t show their affection for you in public?

    Five and six ?are more formulaic loglines:

    5 A budding romance between two rival social media stars is threatened by a heartless talent manger.

    6 An?unlikely romance between?a laid back pro gamer and a perfectionist Youtube girl?sends ?her?page?views plummeting.?Her heartless manger schemes to break them apart.

    Which one (if any!) make you want to read the synopsis?

    Also I was thinking of using one from the first group and one from the second group in one logline. 1+5 for example.

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  3. Posted: December 17, 2016In:

    In tradition of the French new wave films of the 60s, a young tap-gamer struggles with success and relationship strain after a conglomerate buys his game, while the conglomerate chairman frames an African American trash-man for his recent statuiatory rape lawsuit.

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    Tap-game = a smartphone game that you tap? So is the main character a tap game developer and he made a lot of money selling his game to a big company? If so I think "a young tap game developer" would better describe the MC. Also a better adjective would help. "A brilliant tap game developer"?"A dyslRead more

    Tap-game = a smartphone game that you tap?

    So is the main character a tap game developer and he made a lot of money selling his game to a big company?

    If so I think “a young tap game developer” would better describe the MC.

    Also a better adjective would help. “A brilliant tap game developer”?”A dyslexic tap game developer” etc. S

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