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When their worlds fall apart over the same week, three disenchanted, cash-strapped girlfriends make a pact to attempt three wild ways to make it big ? and get rich – fast.
I'm guessing the three friends' worlds fall apart in different ways. Hence the generic "worlds fall apart" phrasing. Here's my try: When three over-worked and underpaid girlfriends lose their jobs?they?make a pact to try three wild ways to get rich ? fast. She works hard for the money, u hu huh. SoRead more
I’m guessing the three friends’ worlds fall apart in different ways. Hence the generic “worlds fall apart” phrasing.
Here’s my try:
When three over-worked and underpaid girlfriends lose their jobs?they?make a pact to try three wild ways to get rich ? fast.
She works hard for the money, u hu huh. So hard for it honey. I digress….
Why do they they want to get rich? Are they just average everyday materialistic women? ?Or do they have a noble/interesting motivation. ?Why do we care about them?
See lessWhen an innocent girl enters the kill zone for a drone attack, the mission commander must overcome legal and ethical objections to get permission to execute Kenyan terrorists on the verge of a suicide mission.
A timely issue. Very clear premise. I'd like to see an adjective in front of the mission commander."an embattled mission commander"" a veteran mission commander""a retiring mission commander""an inexperienced mission commander"?
A timely issue. Very clear premise. I’d like to see an adjective in front of the mission commander.
“an embattled mission commander”
” a veteran mission commander”
“a retiring mission commander”
“an inexperienced mission commander”
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See lessWhen his memories are stolen and his life backup file altered, a security analyst must use clues hidden within his back up memories to recover a missing 3 weeks of his past that are the key to stopping a devastating attack.
I like the set up.Seems like you need a bit more ooomph after the "to....."When his memories are stolen and his life backup file altered, a security analyst uses clues hidden within his backup memories to...stop a rogue AI program's plan to enslave humanity.to catch?his?daughter's killer.to assassinRead more
I like the set up.
Seems like you need a bit more ooomph after the “to…..”
When his memories are stolen and his life backup file altered, a security analyst uses clues hidden within his backup memories to…stop a rogue AI program’s plan to enslave humanity.
to catch?his?daughter’s killer.
to assassinate the Emperor of Americania.
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