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Talented violinst faces two options of getting away with his suffering-playing the violin.Either follow his evil thoughts that lead him to make a radical solution or follow his best friend's escape plan.
Sorry, this just doesn't work for me. I've got no idea what is "his suffering" - apparently somehow connected to his talent. And I've got no idea what his choices mean. I don't know what the problem is, nor the stakes nor what choices he faces. You obviously have a clear notion of the story so I sugRead more
Sorry, this just doesn’t work for me. I’ve got no idea what is “his suffering” – apparently somehow connected to his talent. And I’ve got no idea what his choices mean. I don’t know what the problem is, nor the stakes nor what choices he faces. You obviously have a clear notion of the story so I suggest try again making the logline less cryptic.
See lessTalented violinst faces two options of getting away with his suffering-playing the violin.Either follow his evil thoughts that lead him to make a radical solution or follow his best friend's escape plan.
Sorry, this just doesn't work for me. I've got no idea what is "his suffering" - apparently somehow connected to his talent. And I've got no idea what his choices mean. I don't know what the problem is, nor the stakes nor what choices he faces. You obviously have a clear notion of the story so I sugRead more
Sorry, this just doesn’t work for me. I’ve got no idea what is “his suffering” – apparently somehow connected to his talent. And I’ve got no idea what his choices mean. I don’t know what the problem is, nor the stakes nor what choices he faces. You obviously have a clear notion of the story so I suggest try again making the logline less cryptic.
See lessAfter finding fame with a stolen screenplay of a recently deceased unsigned screenwriter a movie studio’s script reader turns to murdering his backlog of budding screenwriters for their movie ideas.
BTW - for some reason could not see your post posts. Dark comedy. Good. But same questions. Who's the hero, what's the goal, what are the stakes.
BTW – for some reason could not see your post posts. Dark comedy. Good. But same questions. Who’s the hero, what’s the goal, what are the stakes.
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