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  1. Posted: April 9, 2020In: Romance

    Disillusioned with Hollywood, a movie star returns to her Midwest hometown to attend her high school reunion – only to reignite old flames, rivalries and loves.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on April 10, 2020 at 5:35 pm

    Other ideas: She's returned home to lay low from a sex scandal. She's returned to reconnect with estranged family. She's returned to rediscover her joie de vivre. Unexpectedly falls for sister's boyfriend , a man couldn't be less interested. (primal - I guess.) I dunno - none of them interest me thaRead more

    Other ideas:

    She’s returned home to lay low from a sex scandal.
    She’s returned to reconnect with estranged family.
    She’s returned to rediscover her joie de vivre.

    Unexpectedly falls for sister’s boyfriend , a man couldn’t be less interested. (primal – I guess.)

    I dunno – none of them interest me that much. Also – things like “reconnect with family or rediscover joie de vivre” – I’ve been told you can’t do because it’s too internal. I’m not sure if that’s bullshit or not. To have a very internal objective.

    Certainly, a character should have one objective and only one.

    What do you guys think?

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  2. Posted: April 9, 2020In: Romance

    Disillusioned with Hollywood, a movie star returns to her Midwest hometown to attend her high school reunion – only to reignite old flames, rivalries and loves.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on April 10, 2020 at 5:30 pm

    Also - my original idea/logline looked like this...Two forty-something best friends return home to their old town for a high school reunion, in the hope of recapturing their glory days - only to find their plan thwarted by old friends, flames and enemies.I think I need to do character work to betterRead more

    Also – my original idea/logline looked like this…

    Two forty-something best friends return home to their old town for a high school reunion, in the hope of recapturing their glory days – only to find their plan thwarted by old friends, flames and enemies.

    I think I need to do character work to better understand her intention/objective.

    My way in was her age…

    She’s definitely disillusioned with her life and career. Approaching 50 and reaching that expiration date in Hollywood.

    She’s middle aged. Not much of an actress. More a sex symbol.
    Her sexuality is her commodity – it’s how she’s expiring.

    Why does she go?? To relive her glory days/better days. Gatsby syndrome?
    Trying to recapture lost past? I dunno yet. (Which is not good.)

    ?

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  3. Posted: April 9, 2020In: Romance

    Disillusioned with Hollywood, a movie star returns to her Midwest hometown to attend her high school reunion – only to reignite old flames, rivalries and loves.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on April 10, 2020 at 5:24 pm

    Thanks for the feedback, guys. I agree. Will work on this and post again.

    Thanks for the feedback, guys.

    I agree. Will work on this and post again.

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