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When the town bully humiliates him, a mild-mannered cowboy sets out to reclaim his dignity, only to accidentally kill the man, and set off his violent outlaw family.
Hey. Thanks AHarper. Yeah - I'll think about "town bully". I kept thinking it should start out small - not unlike a bully in the playground. The theme throughout is how violence escalates. You have this mild mannered guy who decides to fight back for once but it soon escalates into something far worRead more
Hey. Thanks AHarper. Yeah – I’ll think about “town bully”. I kept thinking it should start out small – not unlike a bully in the playground.
The theme throughout is how violence escalates. You have this mild mannered guy who decides to fight back for once but it soon escalates into something far worse and involves the whole town.
Should you fight back? Should you stand your ground? Should one fight violence with more violence? Will it end?
See lessWhen the town bully humiliates him, a mild-mannered cowboy sets out to reclaim his dignity, only to accidentally kill the man, and set off his violent outlaw family.
I had some other versions of this - but thought I'd lead with the shortest. When the town bully humiliates him, a mild-mannered cowboy sets out to reclaim his dignity, only to accidentally kill the man, and set off his violent outlaw family, who soon take over the town. - last 6 words I thought wereRead more
I had some other versions of this – but thought I’d lead with the shortest.
When the town bully humiliates him, a mild-mannered cowboy sets out to reclaim his dignity, only to accidentally kill the man, and set off his violent outlaw family, who soon take over the town. – last 6 words I thought were redundant.
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When the town bully humiliates him, a mild-mannered cowboy sets out to reclaim his dignity, only to accidentally kill the man, and set off his family – a gang of violent outlaws. – again, I thought the one I used was quicker. But I dunno, this one seems clearer to me.
What are your thoughts?
See lessWhen his old friend from WWI kills himself, a good-hearted rancher sets off on a harrowing odyssey across Great Depression-era America to personally deliver a letter to the man’s long lost love.
Also - with the original logline - I wasn't sure whether to mention it's a promise he's made to his deceased friend to deliver the letter. I'm hoping that's innate and suggested. Best to see if that translates.
Also – with the original logline – I wasn’t sure whether to mention it’s a promise he’s made to his deceased friend to deliver the letter. I’m hoping that’s innate and suggested. Best to see if that translates.
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