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  1. Posted: November 6, 2019In: Fantasy

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    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 6, 2019 at 6:08 pm

    A mysterious traveller who magically spreads joy to others searches for the family he thought lost centuries ago. - I kind of feel like that's all you need. You've got a unique character. Plenty empathy with the family stuff. Just needs some stakes.After meeting a girl who resembles his people, a myRead more

    A mysterious traveller who magically spreads joy to others searches for the family he thought lost centuries ago.

    – I kind of feel like that’s all you need. You’ve got a unique character. Plenty empathy with the family stuff. Just needs some stakes.

    After meeting a girl who resembles his people, a mysterious traveller who magically spreads joy to others searches for the family he thought lost centuries ago.

    – Including the inciting incident in this one.

    Don’t worry about being wrong. Experiment. (It will keep you creative.)

    Keep carving it down to its essence.

    What do you want to see?

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  2. Posted: November 6, 2019In: Adventure

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    Added an answer on November 6, 2019 at 5:56 pm

    A forest ranger must escape the Oregon wilderness whilst hunted by a sasquatch and the government operatives out to eliminate them both.- trying to be as lean as possible for your query.Protagonist - who must (goal) - or else (disaster will happen if she doesn't succeed).or using another formula (asRead more

    A forest ranger must escape the Oregon wilderness whilst hunted by a sasquatch and the government operatives out to eliminate them both.

    – trying to be as lean as possible for your query.

    Protagonist – who must (goal) – or else (disaster will happen if she doesn’t succeed).

    or using another formula (as I believe we shouldn’t constantly conform to just one formula.)

    1. Who the story is about.
    2. What they strive for.
    3. What stands in her way (antagonistic force/stakes).

    Good luck Kendra.

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  3. Posted: November 6, 2019In: Fantasy

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    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on November 6, 2019 at 5:43 pm

    Interesting. What were your influences for this, Kendra?

    Interesting. What were your influences for this, Kendra?

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