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  1. Posted: May 7, 2019In: Crime

    Series logline:?Set across the NYC Blackout of ?77, a reformed ex-con temporarily returns to his old life of drug dealing to pay for his mother?s hospital bill, but soon learns the game has changed and the players, old and new, are more ruthless than before.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on May 9, 2019 at 3:43 am

    Original logline: In 1977, a reformed ex-con must return to New York City?s violent underworld in order to save his childhood best friend from a dangerous gangster.Do you think I should go back to this one?

    Original logline: In 1977, a reformed ex-con must return to New York City?s violent underworld in order to save his childhood best friend from a dangerous gangster.

    Do you think I should go back to this one?

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  2. Posted: May 7, 2019In: Western

    Series logline:?During the Great Die-Up of 1886, a frontiersman with a dark, shameful past must protect the family he?s taking refuge with from his old Civil War captain, now a deranged U.S. Marshal, who along with his posse is under orders from an unscrupulous company to take their land.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on May 8, 2019 at 10:29 pm

    Also - I might go back to the last one with this. I can't help but feel I'm just tweaking/grinding away at it now. "During a harsh winter, a wanted frontiersman must protect the family he's taking refuge with from a unscrupulous company that wants their land". I got a request from this one and someoRead more

    Also – I might go back to the last one with this. I can’t help but feel I’m just tweaking/grinding away at it now.

    “During a harsh winter, a wanted frontiersman must protect the family he’s taking refuge with from a unscrupulous company that wants their land”.

    I got a request from this one and someone here liked it. Once again – the next time I write something I’ll come with new knowledge of loglines/marketing/hook/bait. I’ll have that in mind when doing that first logline.

    Cheers everyone.

     

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  3. Posted: May 7, 2019In: Western

    Series logline:?During the Great Die-Up of 1886, a frontiersman with a dark, shameful past must protect the family he?s taking refuge with from his old Civil War captain, now a deranged U.S. Marshal, who along with his posse is under orders from an unscrupulous company to take their land.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on May 8, 2019 at 10:25 pm

    The antagonist killed their captain and took control of the situation. The show is about that moral grey area of when killing is justified. In this case, it is - however the antagonist slowly shows off his true colours as a psychopath and a man who genuinely wants to see blood. (The kinda guy who reRead more

    The antagonist killed their captain and took control of the situation. The show is about that moral grey area of when killing is justified.

    In this case, it is – however the antagonist slowly shows off his true colours as a psychopath and a man who genuinely wants to see blood. (The kinda guy who really shouldn’t have a gun in his hand). Meanwhile our protagonist is living alone in the snow wilderness (we learn his self-imposed isolation is almost a penance) – he’s a misanthrope because he hates humanity and what humanity (and what he himself) is capable of. His dark past is that he killed a Native American boy – which will be addressed when he and the antagonist are taken prisoner by Native Americans. Another theme is the “circle of violence” – you do violence to someone, then they’ll do violence to you or someone else, and then it never ends. It’s a circle.

    The protagonist and antagonist share the same darkness – they’ve both done terrible things. But only one is haunted by it. It’s kind of a horror film in a way – to find out you have something in common with someone so evil. I think that’s terrifying (especially to find out/or know that you are the bad guy).

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