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  1. Posted: April 25, 2019In: Western

    During a harsh winter, a frontiersman with a violent past must protect the family he?s taking refuge with from an unscrupulous company that wants their land.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on May 6, 2019 at 1:31 am

    Admittedly - a lot of that stuff was my homage to Westerns. A bit like how Tarantino recycles his favourite films. But yeah - as I?m trying to sell this thing your advice is noted. Hmm. ?I think worst case scenario a producer/manager/agent can google it. ?The Great Die-Up? provokes a response. It'sRead more

    Admittedly – a lot of that stuff was my homage to Westerns. A bit like how Tarantino recycles his favourite films. But yeah – as I?m trying to sell this thing your advice is noted.

    Hmm. ?I think worst case scenario a producer/manager/agent can google it. ?The Great Die-Up? provokes a response. It’s intriguing. Okay. I?ll post again in a few days.

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  2. Posted: April 25, 2019In: Crime

    In 1977, a reformed ex-con, desperate to pay for his mother?s hospital bill, returns to his old life of drug dealing but soon learns the game has changed and the players are more ruthless than before.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on May 4, 2019 at 4:08 am

    I'd say both. The protagonist's war veteran best friend kills the murderous mob boss' daughter. Though the protagonist is looking after his friend - there's conflict here - he has to eventually pick a side and perhaps let go of this guy who has been nothing but a thorn. (One of the themes is whetherRead more

    I’d say both. The protagonist’s war veteran best friend kills the murderous mob boss’ daughter. Though the protagonist is looking after his friend – there’s conflict here – he has to eventually pick a side and perhaps let go of this guy who has been nothing but a thorn. (One of the themes is whether people can change).

    All this happens during a time when other loved ones are in jeopardy. The blackout = no rules, make money/lose money, there’s a lot of opportunities here for a man who’s straddling between good and evil and who is desperate to let go of his past despite not being able to. He could easily let him go but he can’t – and that’s explored throughout the show. Why would he go to hell and back for a friend who (most likely) wouldn’t do the same. (I’d love to go the Scorsese/ martyr complex route – and he’s essentially doing penance by looking after his Johnny Boy).?

    There’s also “The Warriors” territory too. I imagined them having to pass through bad neighbourhood after bad neighbourhood to get home.

    The stakes = his soul.

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  3. Posted: April 25, 2019In: Crime

    In 1977, a reformed ex-con, desperate to pay for his mother?s hospital bill, returns to his old life of drug dealing but soon learns the game has changed and the players are more ruthless than before.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on May 4, 2019 at 3:23 am

    Okay... How about... A reformed ex-con, desperate to pay for his mother?s hospital bill, returns to his old life of drug dealing but soon learns the game has changed and the players are more ruthless than before; all set against the backdrop of the NY Blackout of '77.  

    Okay… How about…

    A reformed ex-con, desperate to pay for his mother?s hospital bill, returns to his old life of drug dealing but soon learns the game has changed and the players are more ruthless than before; all set against the backdrop of the NY Blackout of ’77.

     

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