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An extroverted overweight attorney-turned-actress falls in love with an introverted younger personal trainer and embarks on a life-changing romance. Even though they both know from the beginning that they want different things in life and their time together is limited, they risk their hearts to learn from each other until it is time to say goodbye.
I'm guessing you have a good concept, but need to work on your logline. Tighten, tighten. Extrovert / introvert are good character traits, indeed, but see if you can think of a "fatal flaw". Even something with dramatic irony if you can manage it. A "Christian Baptist Choir Singing" republican womanRead more
I’m guessing you have a good concept, but need to work on your logline. Tighten, tighten.
Extrovert / introvert are good character traits, indeed, but see if you can think of a “fatal flaw”. Even something with dramatic irony if you can manage it.
A “Christian Baptist Choir Singing” republican woman, meets a “stuttering-to-the-point-of-shyness” vegan environmentalilst man…
Stronger contrast. Indeed, I’m sure it’s in your characters, the hard part is making this come across in 25 words or less 🙂
Hell, just focus on what makes them different that the audience can get. Is one holden and one ford?
“An holden-loving attorney-turned-actress falls in love with an younger ford-loving man. Knowing from the beginning that neither wants same things in life, can they ever say goodbye?. ”
(That was awful. But you get the idea).
See lessIt's February 1930, just months after Black Tuesday. In light of their financial woes, a small-town mortician and his arrogant wife start murdering the rich to keep their beloved funeral home afloat.
Questioning how the 1929 crash comes into the story. It's an interesting time in history, and centered on Wall Street. The 1930s depression was more... nation-wide, and would have a different feel to it. (UNLESS of course some of the motive behind the killings was tied to those who caused the crashRead more
Questioning how the 1929 crash comes into the story. It’s an interesting time in history, and centered on Wall Street.
See lessThe 1930s depression was more… nation-wide, and would have a different feel to it.
(UNLESS of course some of the motive behind the killings was tied to those who caused the crash in the first place). So there’s one of two possibilities for me:
“In the background of the 1930s depression, to avoid starvation, an undertaker in a small rural town resorts to killing the rich in order to live”
Or
“Forced into famine by the 1929 stock market crash, a small-underaker seeks revenge/justice on those who may have otherwise gotten away”.
The pro-justice covert rodent group, Anonymouse, hacks the Rat Mob?s plans, but when the Rats get wind of the hackers the mice must scurry underground to prevent the rat mobsters from following through on their nefarious baby mouse smuggling ring.
+10 points for "Maxwell Mouse". I'm stealing that. (I'm kidding, I'm kidding)
+10 points for “Maxwell Mouse”. I’m stealing that.
(I’m kidding, I’m kidding)
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