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After being struck by lightning, a geeky bullied teen discovers that he has the ability to obtain the skills, strength, and knowledge of others via touch, he uses this newly found gift to get even with his tormenters and win the heart of the girl he adores.
It's all too easy, there's no struggle... Like putting a deux ex machina at the top of the story. Either it needs a strong outside antagonistic force, or the antagonistic force should come from the MC himself (like with 'Chronicle' etc...) if there's no battle there's no drama, no stakes, no reasonRead more
It’s all too easy, there’s no struggle… Like putting a deux ex machina at the top of the story. Either it needs a strong outside antagonistic force, or the antagonistic force should come from the MC himself (like with ‘Chronicle’ etc…) if there’s no battle there’s no drama, no stakes, no reason to want to SEE the outcome.
Best of luck.
See lessAfter being struck by lightning, a geeky bullied teen discovers that he has the ability to obtain the skills, strength, and knowledge of others via touch, he uses this newly found gift to get even with his tormenters and win the heart of the girl he adores.
It's all too easy, there's no struggle... Like putting a deux ex machina at the top of the story. Either it needs a strong outside antagonistic force, or the antagonistic force should come from the MC himself (like with 'Chronicle' etc...) if there's no battle there's no drama, no stakes, no reasonRead more
It’s all too easy, there’s no struggle… Like putting a deux ex machina at the top of the story. Either it needs a strong outside antagonistic force, or the antagonistic force should come from the MC himself (like with ‘Chronicle’ etc…) if there’s no battle there’s no drama, no stakes, no reason to want to SEE the outcome.
Best of luck.
See lessA band, a famous rock band (The Beatles), decides about pressing probably their last LP. During the recording they don?t get along, but at last they publish it and they break up. The LP is a smash.
Yep - confusing, particularly "...miss one step to become legend..."... unless this is like an alternate reality type thing it doesn't make sense...despite breaking up the Beatles are probably (still) the most legendary band in history... Also -- in regards to "Abbey Road", Is this a reference to thRead more
Yep – confusing, particularly “…miss one step to become legend…”… unless this is like an alternate reality type thing it doesn’t make sense…despite breaking up the Beatles are probably (still) the most legendary band in history…
Also — in regards to “Abbey Road”, Is this a reference to the album or the studio? If it’s a reference to the album you might have another issue — despite Abbey Road being their last recorded effort (chronologically) compared to what happened between them on LET IT BE the recording of Abbey Road was a cakewalk– one of their most enjoyable to record… Let it Be was where you see their them fully implode… but it had taken awhile to get there — as most of them have said it was a slow death, probably going back to Brian Epstein’s death.
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