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  1. Posted: June 8, 2013In: Public

    After being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 10:13 pm

    or... "After being banished for accidentally killing his Warlord?s enemy target, an inferior martial arts fighter, The Minion, is trained by the enemy?s Elder to become the village?s new hero"... I'll stop now ;)

    or… “After being banished for accidentally killing his Warlord?s enemy target, an inferior martial arts fighter, The Minion, is trained by the enemy?s Elder to become the village?s new hero”…

    I’ll stop now 😉

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  2. Posted: June 8, 2013In: Public

    After being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 10:00 pm

    Hi Richiev, I re-read your revised logline in this thread and think it's a 50-50 split between that and Jean's second last offering -- just IMO 'n all that... Regardless, I think you've got a seriously awesome film on your hands. As I mentioned, I'm no aficionado on martial arts films, but if this wRead more

    Hi Richiev,

    I re-read your revised logline in this thread and think it’s a 50-50 split between that and Jean’s second last offering — just IMO ‘n all that…

    Regardless, I think you’ve got a seriously awesome film on your hands. As I mentioned, I’m no aficionado on martial arts films, but if this was showing down at my local haunt it would be on my list to see. Best of luck with it.

    Below is just my play on Jean’s (ta Jean;) ) — it’s at 29 words, and maybe a bit stumbly, but just FWIW ‘n all that 😉

    “After accidentally killing the protector of an enemy village, a banished inferior martial arts fighter, the Minion, is trained by his enemy?s Elder to fight his own village?s Warlord.”

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  3. Posted: June 5, 2013In: Examples

    Acting in concert, birds start attacking people for no apparent reason.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on June 8, 2013 at 11:11 pm

    You have a point -- maybe he is flawless. Definitely a flawless performance from Rusty.

    You have a point — maybe he is flawless. Definitely a flawless performance from Rusty.

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