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(political action adventure) about Veronica McCabe a college professor who wants to shut down the Plum Island Animal Disease Center. The federal government is bringing live animals with diseases through the community. Her son Alex (9) contracts a rare disease and now she has to find the cure.
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See less(political action adventure) about Veronica McCabe a college professor who wants to shut down the Plum Island Animal Disease Center. The federal government is bringing live animals with diseases through the community. Her son Alex (9) contracts a rare disease and now she has to find the cure.
Nice rewrite SReyes -- The issue that Richiev raised is still valid though -- how does shutting down the disease center contribute to finding a cure for her son? If her son already has said disease shutting down the disease center seems a tad too late... Maybe if her goal in shutting down the diseasRead more
Nice rewrite SReyes —
The issue that Richiev raised is still valid though — how does shutting down the disease center contribute to finding a cure for her son? If her son already has said disease shutting down the disease center seems a tad too late… Maybe if her goal in shutting down the disease center was to prevent other children in the town contracting the disease it would worth…? Although — if that was the case there is an issue with originality because I feel I’ve seen that before…
See less(political action adventure) about Veronica McCabe a college professor who wants to shut down the Plum Island Animal Disease Center. The federal government is bringing live animals with diseases through the community. Her son Alex (9) contracts a rare disease and now she has to find the cure.
I'd have to 2nd Richiev's sentiment -- You should only worry about including the protagonists MAIN goal in the logline, feels fuzzy otherwise... This should also help to reduce the logine to just the one sentence; at three sentences it's getting into synopsis territory. Good luck;)
I’d have to 2nd Richiev’s sentiment — You should only worry about including the protagonists MAIN goal in the logline, feels fuzzy otherwise… This should also help to reduce the logine to just the one sentence; at three sentences it’s getting into synopsis territory.
Good luck;)
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