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  1. Posted: April 23, 2013

    After convincing his reformed felon brother to hold up the bank where the map to a lost goldmine is stored, a disenchanted insurance salesman must finish the job himself when his brother is shot dead by the obstinate bank manager during the heist

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on April 26, 2013 at 11:46 am

    Ha! I thought exactly the same thing when I wrote it -- that's the damn logline -- or the actual seeds of it. Love that quote. Thanks again.

    Ha! I thought exactly the same thing when I wrote it — that’s the damn logline — or the actual seeds of it.

    Love that quote.

    Thanks again.

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  2. Posted: April 25, 2013In: Public

    Abandons by his family Ajay must survive in the wilderness on his own.

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on April 25, 2013 at 8:22 pm

    Very short and sweet -- but I think too short, and not enough compelling information. We need to know something about the family, something about our hero, and names aren't needed for that. ...and without knowing either of these things, what about: Abandoned in the wilderness by his elitist family,Read more

    Very short and sweet — but I think too short, and not enough compelling information. We need to know something about the family, something about our hero, and names aren’t needed for that.

    …and without knowing either of these things, what about:

    Abandoned in the wilderness by his elitist family, a young cripple boy must fight his own fears and a host of hungry beasts to survive the night.

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  3. Posted: April 23, 2013

    After convincing his reformed felon brother to hold up the bank where the map to a lost goldmine is stored, a disenchanted insurance salesman must finish the job himself when his brother is shot dead by the obstinate bank manager during the heist

    Tony Edward Samurai
    Added an answer on April 24, 2013 at 10:06 pm

    ... When an unassuming office clerk discovers the identity of his Father's killer is locked in a safe box at a small town bank he elists the help of his reformed ex-con brother to hold it up.

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    When an unassuming office clerk discovers the identity of his Father’s killer is locked in a safe box at a small town bank he elists the help of his reformed ex-con brother to hold it up.

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