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  1. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    'Inspired by true events; When an underprivileged Pakistani boy is murdered by his richer and more influential counterpart, A rookie lawyer (his best friend) sets on a journey to seek justice against a boy seemingly above the law. As his efforts continue to fail, he must ask himself; is it justice he seeks or revenge?'

    uDawnWrite
    Added an answer on October 15, 2013 at 7:19 pm

    Should this be "man" instead of "boy"? It comes off as an adult movie with adult situations, but boy is throwing me a little. Other than that, very detailed logline.

    Should this be “man” instead of “boy”? It comes off as an adult movie with adult situations, but boy is throwing me a little. Other than that, very detailed logline.

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  2. Posted: October 15, 2013In: Public

    A once academically gifted young man is intent on getting his life back on track. One night while driving home, he?s nearly killed in an accident and falls for the woman who saves him, but her lies and past horror may destroy everything.

    uDawnWrite
    Added an answer on October 15, 2013 at 7:15 pm

    Thank you for the feedback, I'll continue to work on it. However, those questions are important, but that would be giving away the story in my opinion, but I'm still learning.

    Thank you for the feedback, I’ll continue to work on it. However, those questions are important, but that would be giving away the story in my opinion, but I’m still learning.

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  3. Posted: October 13, 2013In: Public

    A teenage prankster must convince his father (a cynical cop) that their elderly neighbour is a psycopath before she kills again.

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    Added an answer on October 15, 2013 at 7:05 pm

    I could see myself watching this. I'm assuming it has a bit of humor to it? I can picture this old lady on a walker, and she has everyone fooled except for the teenager, and of course no one believes him because she is just a "fragile old lady".

    I could see myself watching this. I’m assuming it has a bit of humor to it? I can picture this old lady on a walker, and she has everyone fooled except for the teenager, and of course no one believes him because she is just a “fragile old lady”.

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