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  1. Posted: July 27, 2018In: SciFi

    After a new energy source is used to power an entire city, a young cleaning lady is called to protect the city from supernatural threats called Jinn that are attracted to the energy source. The Jinn take over human bodies and give their hosts supernatural powers.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on August 11, 2018 at 1:26 am

    When a new power source allows djinn to take over the body of defenceless humans, a meek cleaning lady the last descendant of supernatural warriors must fight to save her city.

    When a new power source allows djinn to take over the body of defenceless humans, a meek cleaning lady the last descendant of supernatural warriors must fight to save her city.

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  2. Posted: August 5, 2018In: Comedy

    After being invited to a father daughter picnic by a Dean of a prestigious University, a sleazy community college professor extorts a struggling older student to impersonate a Dr. so he can reconnect with his estranged daughter by convincing her that he has cancer.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on August 8, 2018 at 2:38 am

    I like the new romantic comedy concept. It also has space for all characters to grow. The father to suddenly realise that there is more to life than academic stardom and starts behaving in a father way rather than selfishly. The meek coerced student who has the been the doormat to realise that he isRead more

    I like the new romantic comedy concept. It also has space for all characters to grow. The father to suddenly realise that there is more to life than academic stardom and starts behaving in a father way rather than selfishly. The meek coerced student who has the been the doormat to realise that he is worthy. And for the daughter to act less judgemental around people and forgive both men.

    When his estranged daughter reveals to her father that his meek research assistant is from a wealthy family, a selfish tenure professor tries to exploit that budding relationship to save his university department budget.

    It is one of those movies where the initial goal of the very selfish protagonist changes to the point of being the opposite. In?Rain Man Tom Cruise’s character is a selfish douche bag of the highest order, in the end he has changed to become a decent living, caring brother. From trying to get his late father fortune to give it back to his brother.

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  3. Posted: August 5, 2018In: Comedy

    After being invited to a father daughter picnic by a Dean of a prestigious University, a sleazy community college professor extorts a struggling older student to impersonate a Dr. so he can reconnect with his estranged daughter by convincing her that he has cancer.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on August 7, 2018 at 12:24 am

    Seems eerily similar with the Leviathan's logline and suffers from the same issue: it does not appear to make sense. if we keep the same a concept: a seemingly ordinary worker is taken by the father/godfather to protect an unsuspected family member from a deadly killer. the protagonist cannot just lRead more

    Seems eerily similar with the Leviathan’s logline and suffers from the same issue: it does not appear to make sense.
    if we keep the same a concept: a seemingly ordinary worker is taken by the father/godfather to protect an unsuspected family member from a deadly killer.
    the protagonist cannot just looking tough, he has to have skills: former solder, former hitman, ex convict trying to go straight…
    why would somebody try to kill that innocent women? Is it related to the father: is he a mobster, a on the run convict, or under witness protection, …?
    the requester has to have a justified reason why he hired that person rather than specialist bodyguard.
    also he needs to have a valid justification for not wanting the hiring to be known.

    When a former black ops soldier turned janitor saves an innocent women from murder, he is hired by her estranged father to secretly protect her.

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