1. Posted: May 23, 2012In:

    Moles. Eat Worms.

    wereviking

    Yup, it's a forum for loglines :)

    Yup, it’s a forum for loglines 🙂

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  2. Posted: May 25, 2012In:

    Outside (Sitcom TV Series)

    wereviking

    Insider would surely be a better title, heh? I think similarities to other shows are a problem, but I think this could be an interesting setting so long as you don't immediately abandon your agrophobic premise (I think many people know this term now) as it would be more interesting to see the disconRead more

    Insider would surely be a better title, heh? I think similarities to other shows are a problem, but I think this could be an interesting setting so long as you don’t immediately abandon your agrophobic premise (I think many people know this term now) as it would be more interesting to see the disconnect between the isolated detective and his neighbour/agent who goes out in the real world to enact the investigation.

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  3. Posted: May 25, 2012In:

    After a twisted psychopath is murdered, an evil entity targets the current lineage of those responsible to husk, and kill them to sate his revenge.

    wereviking

    I think you need to find a more direct way to explain the plot device with the "husk" as I have no idea what this means. He wears their skins or possesses their bodies? Why and to do what?

    I think you need to find a more direct way to explain the plot device with the “husk” as I have no idea what this means. He wears their skins or possesses their bodies? Why and to do what?

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