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  1. Posted: May 27, 2012In: Public

    Distraught that his favourite daughter was captured. King Neptune wanted her back, now he is getting angry, very angry.

    wereviking
    Added an answer on May 27, 2012 at 3:46 pm

    Getting your punctuation right is as important as rooting out typoes. Also, why does Neptune want his daughter back, aside from the obvious (which still needs to be explained). I feel this is not a fresh idea (see Splash! or The Little Mermaid). If it is not a cutesy, kids' or quasi-Shakesperean setRead more

    Getting your punctuation right is as important as rooting out typoes. Also, why does Neptune want his daughter back, aside from the obvious (which still needs to be explained). I feel this is not a fresh idea (see Splash! or The Little Mermaid). If it is not a cutesy, kids’ or quasi-Shakesperean setting, I also think a less fairytale name for the king is important. God forbid, if this is a serious exploration of the mermaid sub-genre, the Neptune name rubs up against the “realism” that such a world could exist.

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2012

    "When the President is kidnapped, the First Lady, a former Marine, leads a rescue mission to take down the terrorist with direct roots to the White House"

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    Added an answer on May 26, 2012 at 8:48 pm

    The problem is White House Down or whatever it is called is already in development as a big script sale a month or so back about the president (male) being the ex Army guy who has to bring down the bad guys taking over the White House. A shame, as your idea seems more fresh. But I would advise movinRead more

    The problem is White House Down or whatever it is called is already in development as a big script sale a month or so back about the president (male) being the ex Army guy who has to bring down the bad guys taking over the White House. A shame, as your idea seems more fresh. But I would advise moving on to the next idea as this just won’t go anywhere with a similar film already green lit.

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  3. Posted: May 22, 2012In: Public

    Finding that the term for several lesbian vampires is a 'bed'. Going to Pornithian House, the Lesbian Vampires Hunters and friends go to rid the bed of lesbian vampires from the house of Porn.

    wereviking
    Added an answer on May 26, 2012 at 8:46 pm

    Here's where knowing your movies inside/out important too. There's already a shitty film called Lesbian Vampire Killers. We don't need another one.

    Here’s where knowing your movies inside/out important too. There’s already a shitty film called Lesbian Vampire Killers. We don’t need another one.

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