1. Posted: July 15, 2012In:

    A tragic event leads Meena to dwell into her relationship with her maid Radha.

    wereviking

    Not sure of the function of "to dwell" as a verb in this logline.

    Not sure of the function of “to dwell” as a verb in this logline.

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  2. Posted: July 3, 2012In:

    A lonely young man gets caught up in the craziness of an exclusive nightclub that he discovers might be trafficking drugs but he soon falls head over heels for a quirky girl who is addicted to the club, the only way to save her and maybe himself is to bring it all down.

    wereviking

    You had the makings here already. Loglines just have to be tighter and more concise.

    You had the makings here already. Loglines just have to be tighter and more concise.

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  3. Posted: July 2, 2012In:

    To save his country from invaders and win the hand of his childhood sweetheart (the king?s now widowed daughter), a disgraced young nobleman must triumph in the Knights League: a year-long tournament followed like a sport by rich and poor alike.

    wereviking

    I'm still hoping for an expert opinion. Karel?

    I’m still hoping for an expert opinion. Karel?

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