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  1. Posted: May 20, 2013In: Public

    An aging hitman goes up against his boss over a single night in order to protect his family.

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    Added an answer on May 20, 2013 at 7:39 pm

    "When a retiring hitman is targeted by his own boss, he must revert to his old ways to protect his loved ones."

    “When a retiring hitman is targeted by his own boss, he must revert to his old ways to protect his loved ones.”

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  2. Posted: November 29, 2012In: Public

    When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook and fight to save an ancient, mystical duck recipe.

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    Added an answer on January 12, 2013 at 1:42 pm

    This is the best logline here. I love it. I don't know your story, but I think the logline itself could work with the chef's apprentice rather than a critic... it just reeks of Karate Kid and Bloodsport and all that goodness: When the kung-fu mafia cripple an ageing Chinese chef, his newest apprentiRead more

    This is the best logline here. I love it.

    I don’t know your story, but I think the logline itself could work with the chef’s apprentice rather than a critic… it just reeks of Karate Kid and Bloodsport and all that goodness:

    When the kung-fu mafia cripple an ageing Chinese chef, his newest apprentice must learn to cook, and fight, to protect his master’s heirloom duck recipe.

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  3. Posted: January 12, 2013

    Challenged by a misunderstood gang member who has become a bad influence at their school, a high school freshman pastor strives to remind him the importance of giving the lord a chance with the risk of being a target of the gang member.

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    Added an answer on January 12, 2013 at 10:08 am

    +1 RichieV. This logline is quickly shaping up. Just trying another take: A high school pastor risks his own safety as he strives to imbue the Lord's word on a misunderstood gang member who's rising influence spreads through the school.

    +1 RichieV.
    This logline is quickly shaping up.

    Just trying another take:

    A high school pastor risks his own safety as he strives to imbue the Lord’s word on a misunderstood gang member who’s rising influence spreads through the school.

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