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  1. Posted: January 12, 2013In: Public

    Hey y'all! I wrote 2 for the same script. Preferences, suggestions, ideas are welcome. Great forum !! #1. A promising young professor is forced to return to his remote and crumbling hometown, where he finds a monomaniac preacher who claims to know the secret behind his dark past. #2. After learning of a friend?s mysterious death, a young professor must return to his remote and crumbling hometown, where he finds a monomaniac preacher spreading a dark and dangerous gospel.

    woobot
    Added an answer on January 12, 2013 at 9:57 am

    I like the 2nd one. I don't know what a monomaniac is...guess I'll look it up. Could the preacher be maniacal? What about: After learning of his friend's mysterious death, a young professor returns to his remote hometown, where he must battle a maniacal preacher spreading a dangerous gospel.

    I like the 2nd one.
    I don’t know what a monomaniac is…guess I’ll look it up.
    Could the preacher be maniacal?

    What about:

    After learning of his friend’s mysterious death, a young professor returns to his remote hometown, where he must battle a maniacal preacher spreading a dangerous gospel.

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  2. Posted: January 11, 2013In: Public

    A travelling taco truck smuggling psilocybin mushrooms encounters an interstellar hitchhiker on an interstate highway. Is this interplanetary visitor legit, and are his warnings of an impending alien apocalypse worth heeding?

    woobot
    Added an answer on January 11, 2013 at 1:26 pm

    Good point. What about: Mike and Rich, two stoners smuggling a concealment of magic mushrooms in a taco truck, encounter an interstellar traveller with an apocalyptic warning. Initially passing the humanlike alien off as just another crazy drifter, his predictions become too accurate to ignore, causRead more

    Good point.

    What about:

    Mike and Rich, two stoners smuggling a concealment of magic mushrooms in a taco truck, encounter an interstellar traveller with an apocalyptic warning.

    Initially passing the humanlike alien off as just another crazy drifter, his predictions become too accurate to ignore, causing the unlikely trio to set off on a psychedelic journey to save planet Earth.

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  3. Posted: January 11, 2013In: Public

    An underpaid banker gets a venomous dose of indigenous sorcery when he abuses a loophole to syphon money from a deceased account intended for a community group.

    woobot
    Added an answer on January 11, 2013 at 12:09 pm

    Too wordy? I thought I could cut the 'deceased account' bit. An underpaid banker gets a venomous dose of sorcery when he abuses a loophole to syphon money intended for an indigenous community group.

    Too wordy?

    I thought I could cut the ‘deceased account’ bit.

    An underpaid banker gets a venomous dose of sorcery when he abuses a loophole to syphon money intended for an indigenous community group.

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