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  1. Posted: June 22, 2018In: Adventure

    After the high school bullies reduce the sweet librarian to tears, a popular kid with a bright future risks expulsion to lead an alliance of seven uniquely skilled students to make sure the bullies get kicked out first.

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    Added an answer on June 22, 2018 at 9:10 pm

    Very difficult to imagine what happens in this film.Instead of "After witnessing the high school bullies taking it one step too far," give us a concrete inciting incident. And what does "...put an end to their reign of terror" mean? In the films you mention as comparison, the reigns of terror end whRead more

    Very difficult to imagine what happens in this film.

    Instead of “After witnessing the high school bullies taking it one step too far,” give us a concrete inciting incident. And what does “…put an end to their reign of terror” mean? In the films you mention as comparison, the reigns of terror end when the bandits are dead.

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  2. Posted: April 8, 2017In: SciFi

    When an LA homicide detective uncovers a corporate conspiracy to use clones as assassins and is framed for murder, she must track down her own duplicate to prove her innocence.

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    Added an answer on April 8, 2017 at 8:14 pm

    I like the concept. Here is a rephrasing that fits in the 25 word standard. When a detective unearths a syndicate using clones as assassins, she is framed for murder and must find her own duplicate to prove her innocence. (25 words)

    I like the concept. Here is a rephrasing that fits in the 25 word standard.

    When a detective unearths a syndicate using clones as assassins, she is framed for murder and must find her own duplicate to prove her innocence. (25 words)

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  3. Posted: April 7, 2017In: Drama

    When a jaded business woman tries to sell her eye-sore car to an optimistic college student, they find a time capsule of forgotten items from her youth. Bonding over discovered similar interests, they desperately try to grapple the generational gap, nostalgia and envy of each other’s lives. Ultimately, the woman is forced to either go through with the sale and let go of the past, or hold onto the car which encapsulates it.

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    Added an answer on April 7, 2017 at 3:13 am

    Why doesn't she just take all her personal items out of the car before she sells it? If she did that, what would be left? Seat covers? Bumper stickers? Floor mats? For me a generation gap is 20-25 years. If the woman bought the car in her youth, then it would be at least that old as well. Unless theRead more

    Why doesn’t she just take all her personal items out of the car before she sells it? If she did that, what would be left? Seat covers? Bumper stickers? Floor mats?

    For me a generation gap is 20-25 years. If the woman bought the car in her youth, then it would be at least that old as well.

    Unless the woman must sell the car because she needs the money and the college student must buy that car and no other, there is no drama around the sale itself.

    If this is a love story and the car is just the vehicle? (couldn’t resist the pun) for the relationship to develop, then the 25 word logline should concentrate on the generational problems.

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