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  1. Posted: June 25, 2019In: Noir

    ? When a distraught chemist evades culpability for killing her overbearing boss during a heated argument, she must fend off a psychotic blackmailer?s escalating demands.

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2019 at 10:25 pm

    @dpg? Thanks for the suggestion to use rhetorical devices. 3rd Attempt: After a timid woman accidentally kills her overbearing boss during a heated argument and covers it up, she must deliberately kill an insatiable blackmailer.

    dpg? Thanks for the suggestion to use rhetorical devices.

    3rd Attempt:

    After a timid woman accidentally kills her overbearing boss during a heated argument and covers it up, she must deliberately kill an insatiable blackmailer.

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  2. Posted: May 7, 2019In: Drama

    When the wise Chancellor of Thilikos – a matriarchal desert city,- dies unexpectedly, Indigo is thrust into the new role and must find a way to secure her country?s continued existence despite impending war, a global virus epidemic and rebellion by the Council and her citizens.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2019 at 10:14 pm

    It wold be be better to drop the names and concentrate on roles and traits. E.g.: When the ruler of a matriarchal desert city dies unexpectedly, [her daughter] must take over and secure her country?s continued existence despite impending war, a global virus epidemic and rebellion by the Council andRead more

    It wold be be better to drop the names and concentrate on roles and traits.

    E.g.:

    When the ruler of a matriarchal desert city dies unexpectedly, [her daughter] must take over and secure her country?s continued existence despite impending war, a global virus epidemic and rebellion by the Council and her citizens.

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  3. Posted: July 17, 2018In: Horror

    A group of students decide to throw one last party for their graduation aboard a luxury cruise liner, but the event slowly starts to turn into a nightmare when a stow away begins to wreak havoc on board, punishing the students for their past wrong doings.

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    Added an answer on July 17, 2018 at 6:30 am

    "Punishing the students" -- be more specific. Does the stowaway kill them, or throw them overboard, or steal their clothes?"Past wrong doings" -- more specific. What exactly did they do? Let us know if? punishment fits the crime or is over the top."A group of students" -- How many? The complete highRead more

    “Punishing the students” — be more specific. Does the stowaway kill them, or throw them overboard, or steal their clothes?

    “Past wrong doings” — more specific. What exactly did they do? Let us know if? punishment fits the crime or is over the top.

    “A group of students” — How many? The complete high school (or college) graduating class? Or just four or five? Who should we root for? Is one of them innocent of the past wrongs?

    What is to keep the students from calling security? (Luxury cruise liners have their own security forces to protect passengers.)

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