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A paranoid, schizophrenic man who loves all women does everything in his power to please a dozen quirky and unique females, who may only be in a romantic relationship with him through his skewed perspective.
Maybe I misinterpret, but it sounds more like comedy than drama. Either way, I have a few questions: If the man loves all women, why does he want to please only 12? Why not please all women he meets? What is at stake? What happens if he fails to please any or all of the 12 woman? When you say "...whRead more
Maybe I misinterpret, but it sounds more like comedy than drama. Either way, I have a few questions:
If the man loves all women, why does he want to please only 12? Why not please all women he meets?
What is at stake? What happens if he fails to please any or all of the 12 woman?
When you say “…who may only be in a romantic relationship with him through his skewed perspective…” are you implying that the schizophrenic man thinks the woman are in love with him, but they aren’t? Or that the woman are attracted to him because they find his schizophrenia adorable?
See lessA shy guy tries to seduce a snobby girl during an awkward pre-arranged mating session between their chihuahua dogs. COMEDY SHORT
Calling it "a mating session" sounds as if it is prearranged -- that's one story. If you mean the two dogs met at random in the park and neither owner pulls the the leash to take their dog away -- then that is a different story. Try to make it clear in the logline which story you are going to tell.
Calling it “a mating session” sounds as if it is prearranged — that’s one story. If you mean the two dogs met at random in the park and neither owner pulls the the leash to take their dog away — then that is a different story. Try to make it clear in the logline which story you are going to tell.
See lessWhen his son is taken by a monster into another dimension, a withdrawn divorcee must venture through the portal to bring him back.
I like the idea of a withdrawn man venturing into the unknown to save is son, but why would a "monster" kidnap a little boy? Why doesn't the monster just eat the boy? On the other hand, if you say the boy was kidnapped by an "alien", then we might imagine the boy has to be saved before the alien's pRead more
I like the idea of a withdrawn man venturing into the unknown to save is son, but why would a “monster” kidnap a little boy? Why doesn’t the monster just eat the boy? On the other hand, if you say the boy was kidnapped by an “alien”, then we might imagine the boy has to be saved before the alien’s perform nefarious experiments on the poor lad. Also, if the boy is taken by monsters, the man must be a warrior type to succeed, if the boy is taken by aliens, the father can be an office worker who succeeds by being clever. It depends upon how you want to develop the story.
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