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When a young Australian Muslim girl loses her mother, her grief turns to an obsession with building robots, where she fights for the chance to win an International Robotics Championship and realise a dream her mother never could.
Interesting premise. How does the fact that the girl is Muslim enter the story? Do her Muslim teachers discourage her from building human like robots because they believe it violates Islamic teachings? If so, bring that out in the logline. If, on the other hand, her being Muslim brings no conflict iRead more
Interesting premise.
How does the fact that the girl is Muslim enter the story? Do her Muslim teachers discourage her from building human like robots because they believe it violates Islamic teachings? If so, bring that out in the logline. If, on the other hand, her being Muslim brings no conflict into the story, then you can leave it out.
Also, I do not understand what the dream is her mother could never realize. Was she also building robots?
See lessWhen a cynical woman and idealistic man find themselves on a sinking boat far out to sea, they must find a way to work together to survive until help arrives.
I'm having trouble understanding how the two got into this situation. If it is only them on the boat, they must work well together or they would not have gotten far out to sea. Or, are they the only survivors of a ship that sank and they are sitting in a leaky lifeboat? Or, is she a fisherman and heRead more
I’m having trouble understanding how the two got into this situation. If it is only them on the boat, they must work well together or they would not have gotten far out to sea. Or, are they the only survivors of a ship that sank and they are sitting in a leaky lifeboat? Or, is she a fisherman and he a tourist who hired her for a one day fishing tour, and then the motor broke down far from shore? Or did the crew of a small yacht leave them behind when they abandoned ship?
A bit more background would help us visualize the situation and understand the circumstances.
See lessWhen a self-described ?monster? is released from prison after 25 years, he must confront his past and modern America on the 2000 mile trip home with his only friend for company; the person who betrayed him. That?s me.
If you say you betrayed him, it sounds as if you were the co-conspirator who turned state's evidence and got off free while he went to jail. On the other hand, if you were the witness (or victim) whose testimony sent him to jail, then you did not betray him. Either way, I think the logline would beRead more
If you say you betrayed him, it sounds as if you were the co-conspirator who turned state’s evidence and got off free while he went to jail.
On the other hand, if you were the witness (or victim) whose testimony sent him to jail, then you did not betray him.
Either way, I think the logline would be strengthened if it mentioned the specific crime and your relationship to it.
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