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During the preparation for the summer vacation, a girl “noha” was killed in mysterious circumstances and the investigator”soliman” and her friends are trying to discover the identity of the murder
The phrase "During the preparation for the summer vacation" does not tell us much and seems irrelevant to what follows. Drop the placeholders "noha" and "soliman" as loglines should not contain names. "killed in mysterious circumstances" -> murdered "discover the identity of the murder" -> finRead more
The phrase “During the preparation for the summer vacation” does not tell us much and seems irrelevant to what follows.
Drop the placeholders “noha” and “soliman” as loglines should not contain names.
“killed in mysterious circumstances” -> murdered
“discover the identity of the murder” -> find the murderer
What we learned then: a girl was murdered and an investigator and her friends are trying to find the murderer.
This is a generic plot. What is different in your story from all the other murder mysteries? Be specific.
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After a scientist turns a waitress into a giant, he is kidnapped by mobsters and she must rescue him before she returns to normal.
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This sounds like the description of a single scene, not an entire 90 minute movie. Since you posted this under SciFi, you should add some SciFi elements to the logline.
This sounds like the description of a single scene, not an entire 90 minute movie.
Since you posted this under SciFi, you should add some SciFi elements to the logline.
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