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  1. Posted: February 20, 2020In: Comedy

    After his wife dies in a car accident, a man must face homelessness raising his three daughters.

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    Added an answer on February 20, 2020 at 6:06 pm

    The logical connection between the wife's death and family's homelessness is missing. In fact, I would claim the wife's death is not the inciting incident, rather the story starts when the man loses the house.?When a single father of three, still mourning his beloved wife, loses his house to forecloRead more

    The logical connection between the wife’s death and family’s homelessness is missing. In fact, I would claim the wife’s death is not the inciting incident, rather the story starts when the man loses the house.

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    When a single father of three, still mourning his beloved wife, loses his house to foreclosure, he struggles to keep his family safe and whole on the streets of LA (or whatever city you want to use for your story).

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  2. Posted: February 12, 2020In: Comedy

    After a student accidentally dies and she gets the blame, a burned-out teacher goes on the run, but when news spreads and kids? behaviour and test results improve nationwide, teachers unite and she must lead them in a revolution to bring fear and respect back to the classroom.

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    Added an answer on February 12, 2020 at 5:23 am

    My generation saw the last of corporal punishment in American schools. Though a swat on the rear with a two-inch thick hickory board may have kept a class of rowdy boys in line, we never faced capital punishment. Sorry, but I can't buy into the premise. Discipline does not require corporal punishmenRead more

    My generation saw the last of corporal punishment in American schools. Though a swat on the rear with a two-inch thick hickory board may have kept a class of rowdy boys in line, we never faced capital punishment.

    Sorry, but I can’t buy into the premise. Discipline does not require corporal punishment, rather it requires that sanctions be consequently? administered. If you break the rules, you face the consequences. I think all you need is teacher who takes a hard line, but get results — not one who murders her students.

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  3. Posted: February 7, 2020In: SciFi

    In a future post-apocalypse society, where reproduction is only for ?the worthy?, a young woman chosen for reproduction must convince her leaders to spare her life after announcing that she doesn?t want to have children.

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    Added an answer on February 8, 2020 at 1:57 am

    Why wouldn't the decision not to have children automatically place that person in the "unworthy" category? If the psychological state of not wanting children is genetically conditioned, you wouldn't want that predisposition passed on to any offspring.In other words, as Trix asks, what makes someoneRead more

    Why wouldn’t the decision not to have children automatically place that person in the “unworthy” category? If the psychological state of not wanting children is genetically conditioned, you wouldn’t want that predisposition passed on to any offspring.

    In other words, as Trix asks, what makes someone “unworthy”? Genetics? Psychology? Illness? Income? Ancestry? Race? Religion?

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