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This doesn't read properly. I'm confused as to what the story is actually about. Check out the "Our formula" tab for help with formatting.
My questions that I have currently:
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- Who's the protagonist?
- Who is getting revenge against who and how?
- How is this a comedy?
Once this logline is in a more conventional format, and at the very least provides answers to 1 & 2 above, it will be easier to offer more feedback.
Fwiw, I do like what I think is the idea behind this. I need more information to understand it better though.