by savinh0 · Showrunner · 2,300 pts
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Categories: Romance
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In the age of the internet, I don't see how passing himself off as a successful newspaper owner is credible.? All she has to do is google his name and the name of the paper he says he owns to find out he's an impostor.? Which she would surely do if she has any interest in him.? That's SOP these days.
Savinh0:
One other thought:? The shy-guy must compete for her attention and affection with a romantic rival who is everything he isn't.? And may be pushing for and on the verge of getting her to marry him.
The end of Act 2 "darkest hour" could be her agreeing to marry the rival.? And she asks the shy guy photographer to shoot their wedding.
Now what will he do?? What must he do?
Whatever, I see a more interesting story with your protagonist in the role of a photographer than the other roles you have been auditioning him in other loglines.
fwiw
Savinh0:
One other thought:? The shy-guy must compete for her attention and affection with a romantic rival who is everything he isn't.? And may be pushing for and on the verge of getting her to marry him.
The end of Act 2 "darkest hour" could be her agreeing to marry the rival.? And she asks the shy guy photographer to shoot their wedding.
Now what will he do?? What must he do?
Whatever, I see a more interesting story with your protagonist in the role of a photographer than the other roles you have been auditioning him in other loglines.
fwiw
