Once an insecure sexy convict starts dating a professional boxer, that gives her the world and change her for the better she never expected. A childhood friend tracks her down in order to confess love for her, and she is left with a torn decision choosing between a long time friend and the man of her dreams. Les Be Honest   Don’t know if better, I’ll keep trying. However, seems a bit generic aye? not interesting enough i think.

Everything is generic at the heart of it. You can dump so much and start lean.

I notice Her used a lot. So not 100% sure of everyone's sexuality. Box may imply male (just a more common gender).

After escaping poverty and building a life with her rich boxer boyfriend a woman is contacted by a woman from her past that she is still in love with.

Everyone can tell what happens next.

Agree with mikepedley85.? Particularly in? characterizing the protagonist as "sexy".? In the #MeToo era that just won't fly.? In a logline the protagonist should be defined in terms of either a character strength or a character weakness.

Agree with mikepedley85.? Particularly in? characterizing the protagonist as "sexy".? In the #MeToo era that just won't fly.? In a logline the protagonist should be defined in terms of either a character strength or a character weakness.